{"id":9637,"date":"2017-06-29T00:00:00","date_gmt":"2017-06-29T00:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/?p=9637"},"modified":"2024-05-08T21:30:30","modified_gmt":"2024-05-08T21:30:30","slug":"nonprofit-storytelling","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/blog\/nonprofit-storytelling\/","title":{"rendered":"The Hero&#8217;s Journey: How To Write A Compelling Story That Inspires Donors To Get Involved"},"content":{"rendered":"<h2>You Are A Storyteller<\/h2>\n<p>When you picture a storyteller, what do you see? A mythic figure beside a campfire? A gregarious \u201clife of the party\u201d person? A novelist? A Hollywood director?<\/p>\n<p>Do you see yourself?<\/p>\n<p>Storytelling is essential for fundraising. At CauseVox, we often say storytelling is<a href=\"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/blog\/story-driven-fundraising\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"> fundraising fuel<\/a>. But telling your story in a way that moves people to action and compassion can be tricky. Luckily, storytelling is a learnable skill, and humans are keyed into one story in particular.<\/p>\n<p>You can learn to be an effective, engaging storyteller. You don\u2019t need \u201ctalent\u201d or a \u201cgift\u201d or even a campfire. You just need a plan, a monomyth (more on that in a minute) and maybe a little practice. Here&#8217;s how you can write a compelling story that inspires donors to get involved.<\/p>\n<h3 style=\"text-align: center; font-size: 1.75em;\"><em>&#8220;You can learn to be an effective, engaging storyteller.&#8221;<\/em>&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/ctt.ec\/n5TZk\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-size: .5em;\"><i class=\"icon ion-social-twitter\"><\/i>tweet this<\/span><\/a><\/h3>\n<h2>What A Story Does<\/h2>\n<p>Before we get into telling stories, let\u2019s talk about what they do and why we tell them.<\/p>\n<p>A well-told story:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Engages our brains like nothing else<\/li>\n<li>Creates a personal connection with information<\/li>\n<li>Helps us make sense of complicated situations or concepts<\/li>\n<li>Provokes emotion, while shutting down skepticism<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>In order to make a <a href=\"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/donation-page\/\">donation<\/a> to a cause, a person needs to be engaged, personally connected, and emotionally-provoked. They need to understand why a cause is important, who it impacts, and why their help is necessary. Telling a story accomplishes all of these things in one fell swoop.<\/p>\n<h2>The One Story You Need To Tell: The Hero\u2019s Journey<\/h2>\n<p>Good news! You don\u2019t need to start from scratch when you\u2019re telling your story. There is one essential story that humans are already looking for: The Hero\u2019s Journey.<\/p>\n<p>Nerd time: The Hero\u2019s Journey was most famously described by American mythologist Joseph Campbell, in his 1949 book <em>The Hero with a Thousand Faces<\/em>. Campbell\u2019s theory of<em> monomyth <\/em>suggests that all the great myths share common elements and follow the same basic structure.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-9648 \" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Joseph-Campbell.jpg\" alt=\"Joseph Campbell's Hero's Journey provides storytelling structure for nonprofits\" width=\"330\" height=\"503\"><\/p>\n<p>Audiences automatically know how to follow a Hero\u2019s Journey, because it\u2019s present in most of the stories we know, from The Odyssey to Cinderella to Star Wars.<\/p>\n<h2>What Happens To A Hero<\/h2>\n<p>So what is this monomyth, anyhow? Campbell identified 17 steps on the Hero\u2019s Journey, but for the purposes of nonprofit storytelling, we\u2019ll streamline. Basically, it goes like this:<\/p>\n<p><strong>The Hero<\/strong> is living in the ordinary world, minding their own business, when they receive<strong> a call <\/strong>to adventure. They do not immediately want to answer the call, but eventually do, usually with the help of a <strong>guide\/mentor<\/strong> figure. The adventure is on!<\/p>\n<p>Next, the Hero encounters<strong> trials and tribulations<\/strong>, from which they learn important lessons. These all lead up to a <strong>great big ultimate confrontation<\/strong> of a challenge\/monster\/evil to be defeated. <strong>The Hero defeats it<\/strong>!<\/p>\n<p>Finally,<strong> the Hero returns<\/strong> from their journey, with new knowledge and a new perspective.<\/p>\n<p>If this all seems kind of esoteric, think about these Hero Journeys:<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-9652 \" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Heros-Journey-Story-Chart-1.png\" alt=\"The Hero's Journey is everywhere.\" width=\"741\" height=\"572\"><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-9649\" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Wizard-of-Oz.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"502\" height=\"292\"><\/p>\n<h2>Tell It Like An Adventure<\/h2>\n<p>While Campbell has influenced storytellers from George Lucas to advertising executives, the application to fundraising might not be immediately apparent. \u201cThis isn\u2019t Star Wars,\u201d you might say. \u201cThis is the Grand Adventure of Please Support Environmental Policy Advocacy.\u2019 No one is clamoring for the movie rights.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Don\u2019t worry&#8211;your story does not need to be particularly adventurous for you tell it like an adventure. The structure of the story is what makes it appeal to us.<\/p>\n<p>For an update on the Hero\u2019s Journey, take a look at <a href=\"https:\/\/storybrand.com\/online-marketing-workshop\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow\">Donald Miller\u2019s Story Brand <\/a>format:<\/p>\n<p>A character has a problem, they meet a guide who gives them a plan that calls them to action, resulting in comedy or tragedy.<\/p>\n<h2>The Donor With A Thousand Faces<\/h2>\n<p>You don\u2019t need to go on a quest to find the hero of your story. The best hero of a nonprofit story is always the same: It\u2019s the donor themselves. It\u2019s logical to think that when you\u2019re telling an organizational story that the organization is the hero, but your story will have a lot more impact if you center on the donor. Make it about them.<\/p>\n<p>Beyond Borders is truly doing heroic work to end child slavery in Haiti. Still, their Not Forgotten Haiti campaign on CauseVox put the donor front and center. The donor is immediately given a heroic task: ensuring no child or family is forgotten.<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-9647 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Home-of-Hope-Hero.png\" alt=\"Show your nonprofit's impact on real lives. \" width=\"822\" height=\"388\"> <img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-large wp-image-9650\" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/not-forgotten-haiti.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"740\" height=\"488\"><\/p>\n<h2>You\u2019re Our Only Hope: Introducing The Problem<\/h2>\n<p>Introducing the problem is where you make the case for why you need your hero\u2019s help. Before they can set off on the Yellow Brick Road, you need to tell them about the Wicked Witch of the West.<\/p>\n<p>Take a look at this story from Nicholas House, a homeless shelter in Atlanta:<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-9638 \" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Hero-Journey-Nicholas-House-1-1024x486.png\" alt=\"Nonprofit storytelling is emotional.\" width=\"740\" height=\"351\"><\/p>\n<p><em>Think how you would feel if you had no option but to move your family into a facility that offered no privacy \u2013 a place where you had to eat, sleep and sometimes even shower in a room full of strangers, many of them with substance abuse problems, criminal backgrounds and mental disorders.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Now consider about how you would feel if you had to do all of the above while separated from all or part of your family. You know they are someplace similar, but you have no real confidence about where they are, whether or not they are safe, or if they are scared without you. And you are completely powerless to do anything about it.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Nicholas House is very specific, which engages our emotions. We understand the problem emotionally because we can imagine being alone and separated from our families. All of a sudden the fact that Nicholas House keeps families together <em>matters <\/em>to us.<\/p>\n<h2>Be A Good Guide<\/h2>\n<p>When you make the donor the hero, the organization takes on the role of the guide or mentor. You give them a plan, and call them to action to solve the problem. You set them on the course to achieve heroic things.<\/p>\n<h3 style=\"text-align: center; font-size: 1.75em;\"><em>&#8220;When you make the donor the hero, the organization takes on the role of the guide&#8230;&#8221;<\/em>&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/ctt.ec\/b2F8I\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-size: .5em;\"><i class=\"icon ion-social-twitter\"><\/i>tweet this<\/span><\/a><\/h3>\n<p>One of the Guide\u2019s most important jobs is to inform the hero of their potential. Every Luke Skywalker needs an Obi Wan Kenobi to tell him that there\u2019s a thing called the Force and he can use it. In the same way, you need to let your donors know that they are heroes who can make big differences for important causes.<\/p>\n<p>In this moving campaign from Home of Hope, founder and director Edith Lukabwe is a thorough guide. She introduces us to the dire situation children with disabilities face in Uganda, and shows us how Home of Hope has found a way to help. She invites us to be heroes for these children.<\/p>\n<p><center><iframe loading=\"lazy\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/5-tlxs5MLk0\" width=\"560\" height=\"315\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/center><\/p>\n<p>In addition to their video, Home of Hope uses the About section of their CauseVox campaign to bring home the message that donating to their expansion is a heroic thing to do.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_9647\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-9647\" style=\"width: 741px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-9647 \" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Home-of-Hope-Hero.png\" alt=\"Show how heroic it is to help.\" width=\"741\" height=\"350\"><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-9647\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">\u201cYou can be the reason their lives change forever.\u201d Because you\u2019re a hero.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Even their donor levels reinforce the donor\u2019s heroic status:<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-9646 \" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Home-of-Hope-Donor-Levels.png\" alt=\"Make your donors feel like heroes.\" width=\"310\" height=\"751\"><\/p>\n<h2>Don\u2019t Worry, We Have A Plan<\/h2>\n<p>The plan is how you\u2019re proposing to solve the problem. You must be clear and concise throughout your storytelling, but it\u2019s especially important to be simple and clear when describing what you plan to do.<\/p>\n<p>In the context of the Hero\u2019s Journey, think about Star Wars again. Obi-Wan Kenobi did not tell Luke about ten evil things the Empire was up to, run some ideas for solving the problems by him, and then discuss the details of the history of the Jedi Knights. Instead, he kept it clear: They need to rescue Princess Leia from the Empire, and they need to find a ship.<\/p>\n<p>You need to be as clear as Obi-Wan Kenobi. What, specifically, are you going to do? Why is this the plan?<\/p>\n<p>World Bicycle Relief has a clear plan to solve several problems: Give people bicycles. They can sum up their plan in one sentence: \u201cA strong, reliable bicycle helps people thrive.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>They demonstrate how effective the plan is with personal stories, and facts that show cause and effect.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_9644\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-9644\" style=\"width: 740px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-9644 \" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Hero-Journey-WBR-1-1024x590.png\" alt=\"Tell stories that show your nonprofit results.\" width=\"740\" height=\"426\"><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-9644\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">World Bicycle Relief shows us the life-changing results of the plan: Georgina has a strong, reliable bicycle, so she can deliver twice as much milk.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<h2>Do Something! The Call to Action<\/h2>\n<p>It\u2019s time to ask your hero to make a heroic move. Of course, in fundraising, we know that what we\u2019re asking them to do, at its most basic, is give money. However, that isn\u2019t all we\u2019re asking them to do. We\u2019re asking them to make the results of the plan real. We\u2019re asking them to:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Make a difference<\/li>\n<li>Save the day<\/li>\n<li>Protect people<\/li>\n<li>Provide for someone<\/li>\n<li>Fight evil<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>A call to action is about acting, so give your donor\/hero something active to do. Use powerful verbs like \u201csave,\u201d \u201chelp,\u201d and \u201cprotect\u201d to describe their heroic contribution.<\/p>\n<p><center><\/p>\n<blockquote class=\"twitter-tweet\" data-lang=\"en\">\n<p dir=\"ltr\" lang=\"en\">Our 113-year-old shelter home needs maintenance and repairs! Will you help us raise $5k to keep our families safe? <a href=\"https:\/\/t.co\/ezEwqDcYNT\">https:\/\/t.co\/ezEwqDcYNT<\/a> <a href=\"https:\/\/t.co\/BMUjcBdlRt\">pic.twitter.com\/BMUjcBdlRt<\/a><\/p>\n<p>\u2014 Nicholas House, Inc. (@NicholasHouse) <a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/NicholasHouse\/status\/845292172350046209\" rel=\"noopener\">March 24, 2017<\/a><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><\/center><br \/>\n<script async=\"\" src=\"\/\/platform.twitter.com\/widgets.js\" charset=\"utf-8\"><\/script><\/p>\n<h2>We Get Results!<\/h2>\n<p>Finally, after your call to action, you get to paint a picture of a world in which your plan is working, and show the hero the consequences of their heroism. Show them how they helped with specific examples of their impact.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_9640\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-9640\" style=\"width: 740px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-9640 \" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Hero-Journey-Nicholas-House-3.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"740\" height=\"586\"><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-9640\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Show the impact your nonprofit makes every time you ask for donations.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>In some instances, you may want to show the results of doing nothing. What does the world look like without your plan going into action? When Royal Expressions OPEN did not receive a grant to continue their dance program, they showed the sad impact on the children they serve.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_9642\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-9642\" style=\"width: 740px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-9642 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Hero-Journey-Open-2-1024x462.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"740\" height=\"334\"><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-9642\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">\u201cTo feel that others do not care if you succeed in life or not is tragic.\u201d<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<figure id=\"attachment_9641\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-9641\" style=\"width: 740px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-9641 size-large\" src=\"https:\/\/causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/Hero-Journey-Open-1-1024x521.png\" alt=\"Crowdfunding on CauseVox keeps kids dancing.\" width=\"740\" height=\"377\"><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-9641\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">OPEN ran a successful fundraising campaign on CauseVox and showed children they care.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<h2>Get Started Telling Your Story<\/h2>\n<p>Use our helpful worksheet to embark on your own heroic journey.<\/p>\n<h2>The Hero\u2019s Journey: A Storytelling Worksheet<\/h2>\n<h3>Brainstorm: 5 Things<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>What is the heroic thing you\u2019re asking the donor to do?<\/li>\n<li>What is the problem you\u2019re asking them to face?\n<ul>\n<li>What is the emotional impact of this problem?<\/li>\n<li>Why is it important?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>Why are you qualified to solve this problem?<\/li>\n<li>What is your problem-solving plan?<\/li>\n<li>What are the results of their heroic action?<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Introduce The Problem:<\/h3>\n<p>The problem is______________________. This means ________________. This affects people because _________________. The problem makes them feel ____________.<\/p>\n<p><em>Ex: The problem is transportation is hard to come by in rural Africa. This means people can only travel as far as they can walk. This affects people because it limits their access to work and school,and &nbsp;limits their earning potential to walkable distances, which may not be enough to make a living. The problem makes them feel trapped and hopeless.<\/em><\/p>\n<h3>Introduce Yourself<\/h3>\n<p>Our organization is ready to solve this problem because_________________.<\/p>\n<p><em>Ex: We\u2019ve been tackling it for 30 years. We\u2019ve solved this problem in another place. We\u2019ve done tons of research that says this is the way to solve it. <\/em><\/p>\n<h3>Give Them A Plan<\/h3>\n<p>We will address the problem by____________________________.<\/p>\n<p>This will work because______________________.<\/p>\n<p><em>Ex: We will address the problem by supplying bicycles to 100 people in rural Africa. This will work, because a person with a bicycle can travel further for work and school opportunities. <\/em><\/p>\n<h3>Talk Results<\/h3>\n<p>The specific result of the plan is________________.<\/p>\n<p>The emotional impact of the plan is_____________.<\/p>\n<p>If we don\u2019t implement the plan, __________________________.<\/p>\n<p><em>Ex: The result of the plan is 100 individuals are able to work and study when they couldn\u2019t before. The emotional impact of the plan is hope and opportunity. If we don\u2019t implement the plan, these 100 people and their families may not be able to work or attend school. <\/em><\/p>\n<h3>Call To Action<\/h3>\n<p>End your story with a concrete <a href=\"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/blog\/create-compelling-call-to-action\/\">call to action<\/a>. Ask your hero\/donor to do something specific to make the plan work to get the results you hope for. Use powerful words like, \u201chelp,\u201d \u201cdonate,\u201d \u201cgive,\u201d and \u201csupport.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>You can help by_____________________.<\/p>\n<p>Donate _____________________ to____________________.<\/p>\n<p>Support____________________ by____________________.<\/p>\n<p><em>Ex: \u201cDonate $XXX today to provide a bicycle for a high school student in rural Africa.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Enjoy this article? Here&#8217;s a few others you might like:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/blog\/storytelling-grid\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">How To Use A Storytelling Grid<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/blog\/story-driven-fundraising\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Storytelling Should Fuel All Your Fundraising<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/blog\/storytelling-secrets-pixar\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Storytelling Secrets From Pixar<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>You Are A Storyteller When you picture a storyteller, what do you see? A mythic figure beside a campfire? A gregarious \u201clife of the party\u201d person? A novelist? A Hollywood director? Do you see yourself? Storytelling is essential for fundraising. At CauseVox, we often say storytelling is fundraising fuel. But telling your story in a [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":36,"featured_media":50937,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[34],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-9637","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-article"],"acf":[],"featured_image_src":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/freddie-marriage-40251-600x400.jpg","featured_image_src_square":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/05\/freddie-marriage-40251-600x600.jpg","author_info":{"display_name":"Olivia Hosey","author_link":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/author\/ohosey\/"},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/9637","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/36"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=9637"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/9637\/revisions"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/50937"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=9637"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=9637"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.causevox.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=9637"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}